The screening

Mr Bunce and I were dead impressed with your trailers and how the audience responded. We thought they looked great on the big screen. One or two problems to iron out. Here's what I thought about each one.

Charlie- A good combination of shots and editing. The sound quality was good too. Good use of mise en scene. Overall very successful work.


Hannah and Charlotte- Good cinematography and narrative. The sound levels are uneven and some of the transitions didn't work on the big sceen.  Can you change this?

Max and Callie- Excellent in all areas, especially mise en scene and editing. Janny is obviously a top rate director!!

Ollie/Ross- Fab use of sound - both diegetic and non diegetic. Excellent cinematography and effective editing gives the trailer an edgy feel. Good titles too. Add BBFC certificate and fade out at the end.

Nat/ Max- Very exciting work. The sound makes your trailer- it is very well editied and uses conventions successfully. BBFC rate card at beginning. Excellent use of colour.

Keefer- Excellent cinematopraphy and editing. The sound levels are a bit low at the beginning. Good sense of narrative. Great work.

Eva/Sarah- a great idea with good narrative. Your sound lets you down. Can you get this ironed out? The end also cuts off too soon. If you sort these it will be great.